Refuge that You've Built to Flee

I am writing this story in a first person sort of format. I'm not sure how well it is accomplishing that, but I'm strengthening my writing skills and that's all that matters. Alot is stream of consciousness rambling thoughts kind of writing.
DISCLAIMER is as follows. I do not know Hanson or anyone in the record business. I do not live in New York City so forgive me if some details are wrong. I'm sort-of in college, so bear with me on those details. The writing should stay clean because I'm a good girl. The spelling may be a tad wrong because my spell check is ruined somehow on Word and I am a horrid speller.

1-14-02 I'm taking a small break from this. I need some school and personal time. This story is far from over and so is the whole pulpficathon:)

Prolouge (wrote that a while before this)
Chapter 1 (includes Day 1 and Day 11 and Day 2)
Chapter 2 (includes Day 3, Day 4, Day 5 and Part of Day 6
Chapter 3 (includes the other part of Day 6, Day 7, Day 8)
Chapter 4 (includes Day 9, Day 10, part of Day 12, Day 13, Day 14, part of Day 15)
Chapter 5 (includes Day 15, Day16, Day 18, Day 19, Day 20, Day 21 and part of Day 22)
Chapter 6 (includes Day 22, Day 23)
Chapter 7 (includes Day 24, Day 25)

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questions/comments
guestbook to fill with constructive critism